The short story, “An irrevocable diameter” was first published in the “little disturbances of man.” Parley uses various acts of dialogue to express the issues that challenge men in their daily activities. The case of teenagers is highly displayed throughout the story. Cindy feels overprotected by her parents, yet, she demands the freedom to act in her ways. She and Charles are the leading characters in the play. Charles displays the odd things which many would be ashamed to mention. However, the short story presents an analysis of lyricism and the human observations of the real life.
The technique of expressing an individual’s emotions is highly revered in the play. Cindy says that “I am sick and tired of this crap!”. She was yelling at her parents for complaining every time she went home late. Her parents always threatened to call the police. In her dialogue, she affirmed that it was the third time the parents were threatening her. This meant that she did not like the manner in which her parents behaved. She mentioned that she hated her place, as well as living at her home. If she had a way of moving out of her home, she would quickly grab the opportunity. Paley uses this mode of dialogue to express the anger in Cindy for living with her protective parents. In the same manner, the youth in the modern society do not like the manner in which their parents tend to protect them. They act in ways that suggest the annoyance that the parents cause to them. Cindy yelled at her parents and thought that it was better if she was no longer living with them.
The theme of lyricism is reflected in the story when Charles first met Cindy. The name, Charles, has many names, as pointed in the modern society. Some people call it Charlie while others pronounce Charley. The names are familiar to the present generation. The name, as used in the story, reflects a number of these grounds. However, the many names that are formed from the original name, Charles, are used on friendly terms. The availability of Charles in the play suggests the lyricism that the name brings. For those who pronounce the name as Charley, they may be trying to be closer. Charles mentioned that “There was love in physical union” (Paley 76). This meant that he loved Cindy; hence, it would be difficult for them to see the wrongful acts such as smoking. The author mentioned that Charles was unpleasantly a dishonest wolf or a deceitful sheep. The issue of feminist writing covers the excerpts that describe this character. Even though it would be hard to distinguish these traits, it is apparent that fairytale writing was unraveled through cross-examination.
Lyricism prompts Cindy to try the power of her adolescent body. She lies on the floor of an unfinished ceiling with a mouth that is wide open. The imageries created in this section of the story create the plot required to understand the story. The author uses expressions of the manner in which Cindy behaved to illustrate the observations of the real life. It is noted that “Ashes fell to her chest, which was relatively new..”. The description provides a better understanding of the reason that obligated her to ask for understanding from her parents. She is noted to be the shiny daughter, meaning that she was the type that men wanted to have. The reflection also depicts the questions of whether her mind was mature. Even though she could be a mature girl, it is apparent that she was waiting to be popular. This is displayed by the various fallible and real words that the author uses. On the other hand, the words of Charles to her father depict the need for protection. However, the aspect of dialogue leaves the reader at the suspense of who should protect Cindy. However, the reader is not sure whether Charles demands the responsibility or the father. The mother to Charles tells him to enjoy himself when he is still young. In this, the theme of lyricism appears since it is the opposite of the happenings to Cindy. He demands protection from Cindy’s parents while his mother gives him the ultimate freedom he deserves. In this, it is clear that Charles is free to look for a wife while Cindy should be restrained from acting in ways that suggest that she could be looking for a man.
The story sees Charles as the greatest abuser of power. Mr. Graham’s attorney asked “You took it upon yourself, knowing something before the pitfalls of a young girl..”. He uses every opportunity to connect the suspense that the author builds. In this, the man is believed to be a person. The woman is left to encompass moral things and abstracts, which need protection, otherwise she will fall. In this, the author tries to measure the irrevocable diameter between man and woman. Cindy can only display her body by pointing at the circle between her words. Charles, on the other hand, is free to talk to Cindy and express his concerns. It is clear that the two characters have completely diverse sides, which are created by the parents. The distance between Charles and Cindy is the same difference between men and women in the modern society. Cindy cannot attend any functions, and if she has to, her time to return home is limited. Charles’ mother tells him to enjoy himself at a time when Cindy’s mother scolds her from coming home late.
The technique of avoiding tragedy is brought about by the various excerpts between Charles and Cindy. The unalterable distance between them grows and separates them. The connections between the two are formed when Cindy lies under the unfinished ceiling, which is likely to let anything fall. She opens her mouth and eyes. When Charles asks whether she is hot, she claims to be boiling. The manner of expressions has deeper meanings which point their actual differences. Even when the Charles asks in a pleasing manner, Cindy does not seem to be satisfied and answers in a rude manner. The society has taught them lyricisms which many cannot condone. Charles is willing to continue the dialogue, which Cindy makes every effort to end. Charles is admiring but Cindy has no time with him. He is said to be a perfectly comfortable way to spend time with, something that Cindy never understands. As a result, the story continues these lyricisms, pointing the diverse issues raised by children when they are brought up in diverse backgrounds.
In conclusion, the short story presents the proceedings in the modern society. The manner in which children are brought up is different among families. The issues of feminism are displayed throughout the story, whereby Cindy cannot come home late. Her mother scolds her and threatens to call the police. On the other hand, Charles’ mother tells him to enjoy himself when he is young. The lyricism in the story enables the fiction to extend beyond boundaries. Cindy lies below the unfinished ceiling, a situation that provides too much context. The case where the two are allowed to choose between right and wrong is displayed by the extent of the freedom. Cindy feels overprotected while Charles is free to do anything and to go anywhere.